Samantha whimpered as the knife slid into her body. She had meant to be a suprise for her boyfriend on his birthday - as the last candle was blown out she would suddenly transform back and leap into his arms. But one candle had remained burning and now, as eager mouths gathered around brandishing knives and plates, the only suprise she would be giving him was just how sweet she was. | |
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ooh that was a delicious story and great find and idea with the image and the last lit candle. Such a sweet girl friend as I love the willing angle too.
ReplyDeleteWow - nice work. I like the tragic ending.
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